Breana


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4431 Mt. Herbert Ave. San Diego CA 92117 November 18, 2010

Dear Senior Committee,

For my senior project I would like to do a Knowledge Quest about Cosmetology, and teach students who want to go into a cosmetology field how difficult and how much you have to love the field because it is very difficult to stay focused. I would like to have different students from different cosmetology schools come in and do makeovers for the students.

I plan on getting different students and teachers/mentors to talk about the challenges and the rewarding parts of cosmetology I plan on having them talk for a Knowledge Quest and I would do a slideshow about cosmetology. I plan on having a little session maybe on the weekend to have students come to the school most likely moms and daughters and have a mother daughter day, which they will participate in getting their hair/makeup done from some students/mentors from beauty schools, and I will also help. I would like to get a Professor from a beauty school that has been in the cosmetology business for a very long time and knows the ins and outs of cosmetology.

The Knowledge Quest will most likely take thirty minutes of advisory time possibly, the Beauty Session on the weekend will pronbaly be a all day thing. My audience will be students who like cosmetology to participate in the Knowledge Quest and the Mothers and Daughters for the Beauty Session.

Most girls love make-up and hair possibly nails, this will show them that they can have a profession that interests them, because usually they aren't that connected in what do or they aren't really interested in it, who wouldn't want to do what they love.

I understand that plagiarism means failing the project. I plan to do original work and cite all sources used.

Sincerely,

Breana Rensing

Mr Loessel: Your proposal has possibilities but needs some structure. You highlight the various elements of your project but I suggest you put it in a format with the primary theme as main title. Also consider rewriting your Introduction to clearly state you main theme and sub-categories. This could be done in a bullet format.

Amber: I think your idea is great. I think you should do the mother daughter day first. Take picture then have them on a sideshow at your knowledge quest. Maybe you should incourage products that doesn't damage your skin or hair. I think people will have lots of fun.

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